My assignment
What I did well...
I think I had lots of information on Richie McCaw considering I didn't have much prior knowledge. I listed my resources and met the criteria. I haven't received a grade for this assignment yet, but I put 100% effort into it so I'll be proud of myself no matter what.
What I struggled with...
I found it really hard to condense my information, which I didn't do very well. Although I had some good information, it would have been better if I removed a few sentences from each paragraph. I also struggled to find good websites to use for my resources; some of the websites didn't have the answers I was looking for.
What I would do next time...
I would condense my information, possibly use bullet points. A lot of the sentences were lengthy and confusing, so I should have done some re-crafting while editing. I only checked for spelling mistakes etc. So next time I would re-craft my sentences to shorten my paragraphs and make it appealing to read.
From looking at my assignment, the grade I think I got was relational (merit in NCEA grades).
-Lila
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Prudence Word Cloud
Last week we made a word cloud using Word It Out. Our words were about the virtue of prudence, which means knowing what to do in lots of situations - being a leader.
Word cloud made with WordItOut
-Lila
-Lila
Monday, 27 August 2018
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Wednesday, 13 June 2018
What I learned today
I am learning French and I have learned a lot of stuff.
Some of the stuff I learn is:
- How to write in french (hard)
- How to read french
- How to speak french
Today I was learning about
How to ask and answer questions.
The words of things that people buy.
The words of things that people buy.
My microphone wasn't working so I couldn't do the talking.
-Lila
Sunday, 20 May 2018
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