My assignment
What I did well...
I think I had lots of information on Richie McCaw considering I didn't have much prior knowledge. I listed my resources and met the criteria. I haven't received a grade for this assignment yet, but I put 100% effort into it so I'll be proud of myself no matter what.
What I struggled with...
I found it really hard to condense my information, which I didn't do very well. Although I had some good information, it would have been better if I removed a few sentences from each paragraph. I also struggled to find good websites to use for my resources; some of the websites didn't have the answers I was looking for.
What I would do next time...
I would condense my information, possibly use bullet points. A lot of the sentences were lengthy and confusing, so I should have done some re-crafting while editing. I only checked for spelling mistakes etc. So next time I would re-craft my sentences to shorten my paragraphs and make it appealing to read.
From looking at my assignment, the grade I think I got was relational (merit in NCEA grades).
-Lila
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